Thursday, April 21, 2011

Exeunt

Not another word to leave your lips
Unless, however,
That word brushing along the tips
To grace my ear is "yes".
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  1. OliviaApril 21, 2011 at 11:41 PM

    ah i adore this.
    it's simple (just my thing)

    just going to say -- "unless, however, that word brushing along the tips" is quite a mouthful for one line (especially after the previous)
    maybe break it up?

    unless, however, that word
    brushing along the tips

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