Ours for the making and ours for the taking
Don't look with your
eyes
instead;
see
with your soul
grasp the colours of the trees,
feel the wind caress your cheek
and whisper in your ear
become bewitched
by a child's laughter,
see the knowledge in a seniors eyes
Appreciate
the simplest things, for no day is like another
I assume that you wrote this....if so, then I suggest that you work on the cliches and the punctuation to make it stronger. It has some very good potential. I hope that you feel better soon. I have been missing you.
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